High concept: What is the major appeal of the story? What is at stake? My story is appealing because a lot of people can relate to it and it goes through many emotions that people go through every day.
What is the theme (meaning) of your story? The theme of my story is that you don’t always take an L just because you Lose. Sometimes when you lose you can take out more positive than negative. What goal are you struggling to achieve? I’m struggling to describe things better and allowing the readers to be right there in the story with me. I’m also struggling on the beginning of the story and bringing the readers right into the action. Lastly in struggling on the way in ending my story, I have to end my story with no context. How have you been transformed by the event? Back then nothing changed for me. I just knew I was sad and upset because of the loss. Now come to this present day that loss changed me because now that I see that you can get a positive and a lesson out of any loss or set back even if I'm down I look for the positive. Which techniques do you use to conduct you as a character with the audience? Feel sorry Show humanity Admiration I make my readers feel sorry because they can see how sad I am from the crying I do in my story. I show humanity a lot because I use a bunch if feelings and emotions that humans experience every day, so they can connect to the story somehow. In my story I lost a football game, but what if I didn’t lose and I won. I probably wouldn’t have learned the lesson from this situation that there are positive outcomes that come from negative situations. I probably would have never regretted some of the things I did during that season that possibly affected our chances of winning. I was the quarterback but kept telling coach to put me at wide receiver for recruiting reasons and now that I look back on it that was selfish because even though I scored and threw three touchdowns in the game we loss I was still rusty because I did not play a whole game or practice as a qb in three games.
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Sabatino
10/15/2019 07:38:47 pm
This post provides background story context and personal insight into our memoir. Thank you for sharing.
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Javon Lindsey-TerrellHello, I am a student at Delaware County Community College in English 100 learning how to correctly write and analyze my own work to make sure it reaches certain criteria. Archives
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